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The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of
expendeture
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expenditure
 on five different fields of export that are dedicated to the special province
as well as
 the fact that it gives some information about the percentage of transformation in each category during the years 2015 and 2016.
Overall
, there was a slight growth in the
ration
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ratio
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 of all the contents excluding the value of the gems and jewellery. By way of comparison,
the
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petroleum products and
the
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engineered goods were considered to be
of
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the most
valueable
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valuable
 items of the country's
export
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exports
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 between 2015 and 2016. Increasing 8.5%, the engineered goods reached 60 billion
doller
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dollars
dollar
 in 2016.
Moreover
, the petroleum products
was grown
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 3% of
its
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their
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 value concurrently.
In addition
, the other three subjects had less
incomes
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income
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comparing
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 to the petroleum products and
the
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engineered goods.
However
, Textiles had by far the most considerable
raise
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rise
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 in total value
by
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with
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the
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a
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number of
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15.24% increase.
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