The graph below shows the percentage of workers from five different European countries that were absent for a day or more due to illness from 1991 to 2001. Summarise the information by selecting reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line chart illustrates the proportion of
workers
from five different countries in Europe ( Netherlands, France, Sweden, UK, Germany) that were not present for a day or more due to
sickness between 1991 and 2001.
Firstly
, in Germany & the UK, the amount of workers
being sick was in a stable position, starting with
below (3% & 2%) respectively. During the whole period (1991-2001) there were minor fluctuations.
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Whereas
Sweden began with 3% of being sick among workers
and it was in a more or less stable position till 1995. After 1995, the percentage of sick workers
escalated significantly and ended up at over 4.5% in 2001.
On the other hand
, in France & the Netherlands amount of workers
who suffered from illness was quite high (5%, 4.8%) compared to other countries. However
, after 1993, France faced a slight decrease and it reached 3% in 1996. Afterwards, the numbers remained unchanged. Subsequently
, in Netherlands
, the number of sick corps fluctuated. At Correct article usage
the Netherlands
first,
in 1991 the rate was quite high (4.8%). Finally
, it ended with over 5 %.
To sum up
, in the UK & Germany the level of sickness among workers
was quite low and stabilised. On the contrary
, the other three countries suffered from some fluctuations.Submitted by tasnimbookkeeper on
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