The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 word

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 word
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The bar charts illustrate the comparative percentages of native Australian-born
people
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and those born outside
Australia
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in terms of their living area in 1995 and 2010. From an
overall
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perspective, the vast majority of
people
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born outside
Australia
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lived in
cities
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in 1995 and 2010,
while
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the
percentage
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of those non-native lived in the
towns
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and the rural
areas
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dropped.
Moreover
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, the population distribution of native
Australians
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between three different
areas
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remained almost unchanged.
However
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, more residents preferred living in the
cities
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. In 1995, about 50% of
people
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born in
Australia
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resided in the
cities
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,
while
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the
percentage
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of those native
Australians
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who lived in the rural
areas
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and
towns
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was about 30% and 20% respectively.
On the other hand
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, 60% of non-native
Australians
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were accommodated in the
cities
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, in comparison with 40% of
people
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born outside
Australia
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living in the rural
areas
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and just 10% of them lived in the
towns
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. Fifteen years later, the urbanization rate among native
Australians
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increased to more than 60%.
However
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, the
percentage
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of those native who lived in the
towns
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and the rural
areas
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fell to less than 20% in 2010.
Similarly
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, the rate of living in
cities
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for non-native
people
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in
Australia
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reached a peak of 80%,
while
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the
percentage
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of
people
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who were not originally Australian and lived in the
towns
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and rural
areas
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dropped significantly to less than 15%,
overall
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, overall, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, australia, cities, percentage, towns, areas, australians with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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