The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 word
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The bar charts illustrate the comparative percentages of native Australian-born
people
and those born outside Australia
in terms of their living area in 1995 and 2010.
From an overall
perspective, the vast majority of people
born outside Australia
lived in cities
in 1995 and 2010, while
the percentage
of those non-native lived in the towns
and the rural areas
dropped. Moreover
, the population distribution of native Australians
between three different areas
remained almost unchanged. However
, more residents preferred living in the cities
.
In 1995, about 50% of people
born in Australia
resided in the cities
, while
the percentage
of those native Australians
who lived in the rural areas
and towns
was about 30% and 20% respectively. On the other hand
, 60% of non-native Australians
were accommodated in the cities
, in comparison with 40% of people
born outside Australia
living in the rural areas
and just 10% of them lived in the towns
.
Fifteen years later, the urbanization rate among native Australians
increased to more than 60%. However
, the percentage
of those native who lived in the towns
and the rural areas
fell to less than 20% in 2010. Similarly
, the rate of living in cities
for non-native people
in Australia
reached a peak of 80%, while
the percentage
of people
who were not originally Australian and lived in the towns
and rural areas
dropped significantly to less than 15%, overall
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