The three pie charts compare the composition of four different meals, namely breakfast, dinner, lunch and snacks, in terms of three nutrients, namely sodium, saturated fat and added sugar.
The diagram illustrated the proportion of the daily
intake
of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar of each US people
in every single meal and in Fix the agreement mistake
person
snacks
.
For sodium intake
, it is shown that dinner
has the highest proportion. Dinner
is comparativley
highest among Correct your spelling
comparatively
breakfast
, lunch
and snacks
, with 43 per cent
. It is three times that in
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at
breakfast
and that in
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at
lunch
. Lunch
is the second highest with a double than that in breakfast
and that in lunch
while
breakfast
and snacks
are the least, sharing the same percentage
, 14 per cent
.
For the consumption of saturated fat, dinner
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contained the highest percentage
among others, with 37 per cent
. The second highest in
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percentage
is also
in lunch
. However
, snacks
are found to have more saturated fat than that in berakfast
.
For the Correct your spelling
breakfast
intake
of added sugar, snacks
have nearly half of the percentage
, 42 per cent
. Dinner
comes after with only half of that in snacks
. Breakfast
and lunch
have the
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percentage
in
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the
added sugar Correct article usage
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intake
with lunch
having slightly
higher Correct article usage
a slightly
percentage
, 19 per cent
.
All in all, dinner
is comparatively having a high comsumption
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consumption
in
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of
the
nutrients which could be unhealthy if Correct article usage
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exessively
taken, especially for sodium and saturated fat.Correct your spelling
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Vocabulary: Replace the words intake, snacks, dinner, breakfast, lunch, cent, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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