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The three pie charts show the proportion of four kinds of vehicles used in the UK in 1996, 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The three pie charts show the proportion of four kinds of vehicles used in the UK in 1996, 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie charts
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illustrate
illustate
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illustrate
 the percentage of four different
vehicles
 being used in the UK in 1965 , 1985 and 2005
Overall
, it can be observed that private cars outweighed the total
percent
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per cent
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 of remaining types of
vehicles
 except for the
year
of
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1965 which saw the opposite pattern .
Additionally
 , the recycled
vehicles
was
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 seen to be used least throughout the period ,
whereas
 the private ones had the most . With regards to the
year
 where the commercial
vehicles
 accounted for only a fifth . As for 1965 , 40%
cars
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of cars
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 being
drived
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driven
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is
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are
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 the private ones that doubled the
recreational
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number of recreational
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vehicles
 ( 18% ) . Meanwhile , the public transport consisted of a quarter in
this
year
 . Taking a look at 1985 , over
a
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half of
transportation
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the transportation
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 being used in
UK
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the UK
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 was still
privatecar
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private car
 that was 10 times more than
the
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apply
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recreational
vehicles
 .
Likewise
 , the commercial and public transport shared a balance by
similarly
 making up at exactly 20% Turning to the
the
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year
of
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2005 . Spending focus on
the
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public transport ,
it
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which
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 accounted for just over 20% which was just a third of private cars ( 60% ) ,
whereas
 both commercial and recreational
vehicles
 saw
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around
aroud
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around
 10%
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words vehicles, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Proportion
  • Dominant
  • Fluctuations
  • Noticeable increase
  • Significantly decreased
  • Consistent rise
  • Continuous decline
  • Varied trends
  • Data illustrates
  • Common vehicle type
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