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Today more and more people want things instanly (eg.: goods, service, news). Why is this? Is it positive or negative development?

#people #eg #goods #service #news #development
In the modern world,
people
 tend to desire services or commodities right away.
This
 happens because of the developed technology, and
while
this
 can benefit
human
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 significantly, I suppose
this
 will affect
to
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our patience negatively. It is crucial to acknowledge that
the
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computers and artificial technology are doing great jobs to service individuals.
As
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 the appearance of online
network
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networks
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 and the rocket speed in solving information,
people
 gradually become familiar with instant
newly
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 feeds, and they require other fields to perform the same quality.
As a result
, now there are loads of things
can
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 manage the time issues including commodities
delivering
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 and online shopping. It can be understood that
people
 benefit from
this
 high-speed necessity, but it makes the pace of
live
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 become faster than ever. Inhabitants just want their needs to be adapted immediately, so they will not have enough patience to wait for something for too long.
As a consequence
, those
people
, who are always in a hurry, will not find any peace in their mind.
This
 is one of the factors that leads to a recently common phenomenon known as light love. Couples
being
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 in a relationship really fast without knowing much about each other, but when they see something of their partner is not preferable, they will not hesitate to end up that relationship and go find new ones.
This
 affects dramatically
on
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the beauty of love, as some individuals are not willing to have a stable partner but keep playing around with others. In conclusion,
although
 immediate things are
desirables
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,
this
 will have an effect on
people
’s
emotion
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emotions
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 and patience.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • instant gratification
  • advent of technology
  • smartphones
  • internet
  • social media platforms
  • online shopping
  • fast-paced nature
  • modern life
  • immediate satisfaction
  • drive innovation
  • efficiency
  • streamlined
  • user-friendly
  • erosion of patience
  • impulsive buying
  • shallow consumption
  • interpersonal relationships
  • unrealistic standards
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