The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. You should write at least 150 words

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.

Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

You should write at least 150 words
The line graph demonstrates the
amount
of three significant fuels produced in the UK in two decades starting from 1981.
Overall
, as it can be seen there were considerable upward trends in the
production
of natural gas and petroleum during twenty
years
,
while
the
amount
of coal
production
saw a dramatic fall over
this
period. Another interesting point is that in both 1981 and
2000
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2000,
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the most produced fuel was petroleum. Natural gas was the lowest
amount
of fuel produced in 1981; It was about 40
energy
units
; meaning 40 million tons of natural gas. It stood at
this
level for a decade,
then
rose to 100 million tons over the next ten
years
.
The coal
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Coal
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production
plateaued at 80
energy
units
for two
years
from 1981 and
then
fell dramatically in one year to half of the produced
amount
and
then
rose a bit to 60
energy
units
and
then
dropped again to below 40
energy
units
over 15
years
.
The petroleum
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Petroleum
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production
notably grew from 90
energy
units
during 3
years
and reached
at
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140.
Then
, it remained at
this
level for approximately 3
years
then
fell by 40
units
in about five
years
and
then
increased back to 140 in about a decade.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, production, years, energy, units with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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