The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012 You should write at least 150 words

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries.

The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

You should write at least 150 words
The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012 You should write at least 150 words. The line graph demonstrates the percentage of goods transported from Australia to overseas,
Japan
, the US,
China
, and
India
over two decades from 1990.
Overall
, as can be seen, there were upward trends in selling goods to
China
and
India
within twenty-two
years
,
while
decreased exportation to
Japan
and the US was shown in the graph. Another interesting point is that the most amount of commodities were conveyed to
Japan
in 1990.
However
,
China
took the first place of importation from Australia in 2012. Australian export with
Japan
was over 25 per
cent
in 1990.
Then
, it dropped by 5 per
cent
in about 5
years
and remained just under 20 per
cent
over approximately 15
years
. The exportation to the US was about 12 per
cent
in 1990. It fell just below 10 per
cent
in 5
years
and
then
increased to the previous amount in the same period. But it decreased again over 12
years
by 5 percent.
China
and
India
had the lowest amount of imports from Australia; about 2 and 1 percent respectively.
However
, the
quantity
Change the quantifier
number
show examples
of exports to
Japan
increased steadily to 5 times more in over twenty
years
and it turned to over 5
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
show examples
to
Change preposition
in
show examples
India
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words japan, china, india, years, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Line graph
  • Percentage
  • Exports
  • Trend analysis
  • Upward/downward trend
  • Fluctuation
  • Comparison
  • Peak performance
  • Decline
  • Stability
  • Significant
  • Inferred
  • Global events
  • Economic context
  • Reflect
  • Influence
  • Patterns
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