The bar chart below shows of expeditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.
The given bar graph illustrates information about
proportions
of costs for different categories, Correct article usage
the proportions
such
as food, housing facilities, transportation, health care and clothing.
Looking from an overall
perspective it is apparently seen that the most significant facts are housing was the most costly category in all the given countries, and healthcare
and clothing Correct article usage
the healthcare
sector
had tiny numbers in terms of expenditure.
Fix the agreement mistake
sectors
To begin
with, while
the indicator of housing facilities was over 20% in all countries, that of transportation was around 20% in the US and Canada and under 15% in the UK and Japan, in 2009.
Regarding food, health care and clothing, although
the figure for food was under 15% in the United States and Canada, that of the United Kingdom and Japan accounted for over 20%. The healthcare sector and clothing did not contain considerable
number (under 8%).Add an article
a considerable
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