The graph compares employment rates in three sectors of the economy in the UK, 2000-2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the hire rates in three different sectors from the year 2000 to 2010 in the United Kingdom.

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it is clear that

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most citizens are employed by the public

sector

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whilst self-employment is not

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To begin

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with, the employment rate in the public

sector

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started at 38 in 2000 and it hovered at

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number until 2002. The dramatic rise was seen between 2002 to 2004 before it slightly increased to well under 50 in 2005. The hire rate of the public

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oscillated to 48 in 2007 and gradually escalated to 51

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of the period.

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, self-employment in 2000 was nearly 18 and it fluctuated to 18 again in 2003,

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, going up to 30 and

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levelled out through the

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year.

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, the trend of the private

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was reversed compared to the others. It began at approximately 48 in 2003 and went down to 42 in 2002,

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, levelled off for one year and

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continuously declined to roughly 37 in 2008. The overwhelm drop was seen between 2008 to 2009 to 22 and the private

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rate ended at 21 in 2010.