ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The chart delineates the annual
expenditure
of UK citizens belonging to different age groups in three categories: food
and drink, restaurants and hotels, and entertainment
.
According to
the data, entertainment
and food
and drink dominate the highest expenditure
among their peers, which is about 23% for those who are above 60. On the other hand
, lower spending is discernible in people
aged 61 to 75, particularly for restaurants and hotels. However
, the highest expenditure
on entertainment
is noticeable among people
under 30, with 14%. People
from 31 to 60 indicate a high preference for food
and drink over rest. This
might be because of the busy schedule in their lives. Although
one cannot see a noticeable difference in contrast
with restaurants and hotels and entertainment
. Likewise
, people
aged 61+ show the same trend. That is
, they spend roughly around 20 to 23% of their money on food
and drinks. This
is an observable trend, with wise people
choosing healthy food
over anything. The surprising figure in this
graph is the 2% expenditure
on entertainment
by people
in the fourth category. Overall
, entertainment
hits the highest among people
aged 61 to 75, at 23%, whereas
the lowest is among people
under 30, at 6%.Submitted by praneeth2094 on
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