The chart shows the percentage of people in one country, by age group, who visited one or more museums in 2006, 2011 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the percentage of people in one country, by age group, who visited one or more museums in 2006, 2011 and 2016.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
bar chart represents a proportion of individuals of different
age
groups in a country who visited a few museums in the period of 2006, 2011 and 2016.
Firstly
, throughout the
years
2006, 2011 and 2016, there was a significant increase in the percentage of people aged 25-34
years
who visited the
museum
, the attendance rose from slightly above 25% to 33%.
Similarly
, the
age
group of 35-44
years
old saw the same increment which skyrocketed from 20% in 2006 to 30% and 36% in 2011 and 2016 respectively.
In contrast
, citizens aged 55-64 showed little interest in
museum
visitation which showed a decline in attendance from 40% in 2006 to 30% in 2016.
Additionally
, The highest
age
group of people that saw the
museum
was in the year 2006, with 40% of citizens aged 55-64, followed by 35-44
years
of
age
which saw a visitation percentage of 38% in the year 2016.
However
, the lowest
age
group was seen in 2011 which was recorded to be a little below 20%.
To conclude
, it has been shown that people aged 25-34 were more interested in seeing the
museum
compared to individuals aged 55-64
years
who showed a reduction in
museum
attendance as the
years
went by.
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