ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart provides information about the amount of
money
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spent by UK citizens in various
age
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groups during 2004.
Overall
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, it can be seen that groceries prevailed among the aged population of the United Kingdom,
while
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the youngsters under 30 preferred to spend
money
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on restaurants and hotels.
To begin
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with, demand for food and drink increased
accordingly
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with the maturity. It accounted for only 5% of people under 30,
however
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, the community of 31-45 and 46-60
age
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spent nearly 13% and 17% respectively.
Similarly
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, entertainment reached only 6% among people of 30-45
age
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, and 14% for 46-60. In terms of the most invested category, restaurants and hotels hit the highest point at 14% among individuals under 30, and almost 13% of the
money
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was expended by the population of 31-45 and 46-60
age
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community. It is noticeable that the elderly from 61-75 and 76+ rarely attended hotels and restaurants.
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, they spent a large amount of
money
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on food and drink, just a bit more than 20%. About 23% was expended by the 61-75
age
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group on entertainment.
In contrast
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, 76+ old people seemed not to enjoy them much (14%)
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, age with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • categories
  • age groups
  • residents
  • United Kingdom
  • steady increase
  • marked decrease
  • peak
  • age bracket
  • lower spending
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