The charts below show the percentage of water used for different puposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different puposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The six pie charts compare the
use
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of
water
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for various
purposes
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in different areas around the world. From the given figures it can be seen that
water
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used for agricultural
purposes
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is making the
greastest
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greatest
part out of all
while
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the propotion
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propotion
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proportion
of
water
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used for domestic
use
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is less.
Overall
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, it can be seen that in Africa, Central
Asia
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and South East
Asia
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more than 80 per
cent
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of
water
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is used by farmers for agricultural land, South
America
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consuming about 71% for agricultural
purposes
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while
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on the other hand
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usage of
water
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for agriculture purpose in North
America
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and
Europe
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is just 39 and 32 per
cent
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. In regard
with
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to
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industridal
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industrial
use
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North
America
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and
Europe
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are using
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use
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48 per
cent
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and 53 per
cent
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of
water
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which shows there are a lot of industries in these countries,
rest
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the rest
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of
four
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the four
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countries have less than 10 per
cent
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water
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of water
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consumption in regard to industrial
use
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.
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, South
America
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is using
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uses
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19%
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water
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of water
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as
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for
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domestic
purpose
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purposes
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. Central
Asia
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and South East
Asia
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both
are consuming
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consume
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7 per
cent
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water
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of water
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for domestic
purposes
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. North
America
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and
Europe
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is
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are
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consuming 13 per
cent
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and
Europe
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is using 15 per
cent
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.
To conclude
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, it can be seen that most of
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water
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the water
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consumed is
by
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for
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industrial
purpose
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purposes
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and agricultural
puropse
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purpose
purposes
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the sixth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words use, water, purposes, asia, cent, america, europe with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • charts
  • percentage
  • water usage
  • regions
  • North America
  • Europe
  • Africa
  • Asia
  • Oceania
  • South America
  • agriculture
  • industrial usage
  • domestic use
  • significant differences
  • contributor
  • proportion
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