The charts below show the percentage of water used for different puposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The six pie charts compare the
use
of water
for various purposes
in different areas around the world.
From the given figures it can be seen that water
used for agricultural purposes
is making the greastest
part out of all Correct your spelling
greatest
while
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the propotion
propotion
of Correct your spelling
proportion
water
used for domestic use
is less.
Overall
, it can be seen that in Africa, Central Asia
and South East Asia
more than 80 per cent
of water
is used by farmers for agricultural land, South America
consuming about 71% for agricultural purposes
while
on the other hand
usage of water
for agriculture purpose in North America
and Europe
is just 39 and 32 per cent
.
In regard with
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industrial
use
North America
and Europe
are using
48 per Wrong verb form
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cent
and 53 per cent
of water
which shows there are a lot of industries in these countries, rest
of Correct article usage
the rest
four
countries have less than 10 per Correct article usage
the four
cent
water
consumption in regard to industrial Change preposition
of water
use
.
Furthermore
, South America
is using
19% Wrong verb form
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water
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of water
as
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for
purpose
. Central Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
Asia
and South East Asia
both are consuming
7 per Wrong verb form
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cent
water
for domestic Change preposition
of water
purposes
. North America
and Europe
is
consuming 13 per Change the verb form
are
cent
and Europe
is using 15 per cent
.
To conclude
, it can be seen that most of water
consumed is Add an article
the water
by
industrial Change preposition
for
purpose
and agricultural Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
puropse
.Correct your spelling
purpose
purposes
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