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The diagram shows the stages involved in the process of making leather goods

The diagram shows the stages involved in the process of making leather goods
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The images illustrate how the products,
such
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 as bags, shoes, and balls, are prepared using animal fur.
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, by looking at the whole diagram, the total non-cyclic process consists of 11 stages starting from drying animal coating and ending with making the products,
such
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 as bags, shoes, and balls. In the initial stages of the process, the animal
skin
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 is dried, and it
then
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 is taken to a nearby factory by lorry. In the next step, the taken
skin
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 is washed with a mix of water and lime after which, it is soaked with lime.
Subsequently
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, the
skin
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 is flattened by a specific machine, before soaking with a mix of water and tannin vegetable matter. When it comes to the next ones, the soaked
skin
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 is polished to remove impurities by a particular machine, thereby being taken to a factory.
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, the products,
such
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 as bags and shoes are made of the
taken
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coating in the factory.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words skin with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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