The graph compares employment rates in three sectors of the economy in the UK, 2000-2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.

The provided line chart illustrates employment proportion in public

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, private

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, and self-employed throughout the decade from 2000 to 2010.

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private static was outnumbered the others by a noticeable margin, the static was in the

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decreased gradually

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the first three years before it levelled out for a single year. After 2003, the ratio nosedived over the rest of the period, apart from a significant drop in 2009, and reached almost 20% in 2010. In terms of those in

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the proportion remained without a remarkable change until 2003, the statics escalated substantially and became roughly 50%.

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dipped before it hit a peak at approximately 51

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. Meanwhile, Self-employed's line was fluctuating. The line increased

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over the interval and reached around 30%

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, there was a considerable decrease and an increase between 2002 and 2005.