The graph compares employment rates in three sectors of the economy in the UK, 2000-2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.
The provided line chart illustrates employment proportion in public
sector
, private sector
, and self-employed throughout the decade from 2000 to 2010.
Overall
, what stands out is although
private static was outnumbered the others by a noticeable margin, the static was in the last
place at the end
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To begin
, the private sector
rate has
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the first three years before it levelled out for a single year. After 2003, the ratio nosedived over the rest of the period, apart from a significant drop in 2009, and reached almost 20% in 2010. In terms of those in Change preposition
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public
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the public
sector
, although
the proportion remained without a remarkable change until 2003, the statics escalated substantially and became roughly 50%. In addition
, the rate has
dipped before it hit a peak at approximately 51 Unnecessary verb
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percent
.
Meanwhile, Self-employed's line was fluctuating. The line increased Change the spelling
per cent
moderatly
over the interval and reached around 30% Correct your spelling
moderately
at the end
. However
, there was a considerable decrease and an increase between 2002 and 2005.Submitted by a.awh05 on
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