The diagram belows shows the production and processing of milk and dairy products for commercial sale
The given man-made process describes the intricate sequence of steps involved in mass-producing
milk
and dairy. Use synonyms
Overall
, the whole process encompassed 4 main stages, moving from breeding cows to preparing the ingredients, leading to the production Linking Words
finalized
products primed for wholesale.
The initial phase starts with grazing cows that will be milked twice per day for the purpose Change preposition
of finalized
on
getting Change preposition
of
milk
for production. The Use synonyms
milk
, Use synonyms
subsequently
, proceeds to be stored in refrigerators where its freshness is preserved. These refrigerating containers are Linking Words
then
transited by ferries to Dairy every day.
Once Linking Words
milk
has reached factories, it is available to be cooked in 2 different processes consisting of producing pasteurized Use synonyms
milk
and milky foodstuffs. Having completed those requisite steps, the output is prepared for packaging and bottling before being able to be distributed to wholesalers Use synonyms
such
as supermarkets and shopsLinking Words
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