The charts below show the propotions of british, students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The supplied pie charts
gives
information about the number of British Change the verb form
give
students
at a university in the United Kingdom who could speak other languages in addition
to their mother tongue over a ten year
period.
A glance at the charts Add a hyphen
ten-year
reveal
that Spanish Change the verb form
reveals
language
was among the most welcomed language
for English students
at a British University in England. Moreover
, there are minimal changes in British students
' taste in 2000 and 2010.
Just under a third of students
were able to speak Spanish in 2000 and a decade later this
number increased modestly to 35. Also
20 percent of people didn't tend to speak any other languages except their mother tongue in 2000. Add a comma
Also,
Together with
Spanish, this
number comprised half of student
majority.
Regarding Add an article
the student
German
Correct article usage
the German
language
and two other languages, just a tenth of the population had the ability to communicate using those
Change the determiner
that language
those languages
language
in 2000. Interestingly, this
percentage remained unchanged after 10 years. 15 percent
preferred to speak French in 2000. Change the spelling
per cent
However
, the proportion dropped by 5% after ten years.Submitted by TUTOO on
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