The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given visual illustrates the cycle of salmon life; which,

are

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one of the big fishes. In

first

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the first

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step, salmon eggs are put upper river which

move

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moves

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slovely

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slowly

for approximately 5-6 months during

this

period salmons size are 3-8 cm

calls

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Fry.

after

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After

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that, in the second step they move and swim to the other side where

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apply

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lower

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a lower

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river that

flow

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flows

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fastly, almost for four years, and in

this

course

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course,

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they named Smolt with about 12-15cm,

however

, they move to open sea for staying closely 5 years . they return to the river, in

this

time they become

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adult salmon with 70-76cm.

Finally

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Finally,

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they do eggs and

this

cycle is repeated. All in

all

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all,

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salmons do a cycle and live for 5years.