The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given visual illustrates the cycle of salmon life; which,
are
one of the big fishes.
In Correct subject-verb agreement
is
first
step, salmon eggs are put upper river which Add an article
the first
a first
move
Change the verb form
moves
slovely
for approximately 5-6 months during Correct your spelling
slowly
this
period salmons size are 3-8 cm calls
Fry. Wrong verb form
called
after
that, in the second step they move and swim to the other side where Capitalize word
After
is
Unnecessary verb
apply
lower
river that Add an article
a lower
the lower
flow
fastly, almost for four years, and in Change the verb form
flows
this
course
they named Smolt with about 12-15cm, Add a comma
course,
however
, they move to open sea for staying closely 5 years . they return to the river, in this
time they become an
adult salmon with 70-76cm. Correct article usage
apply
Finally
they do eggs and Add a comma
Finally,
this
cycle is repeated.
All in all
salmons do a cycle and live for 5years.Add a comma
all,
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "move" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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