The line graph below describes the production of different fuels in the UK from 1981-2000.

The line graph below describes the production of different fuels in the UK from 1981-2000.
The line graph illustrates the changes in different fuels ( petroleum, natural gas, and coal)
production
in the UK over 19 years from 1981 to 2000.
Overall
, it is obvious that coal and petroleum
production
decreased gradually during the given period.
However
, the figures for natural gas
production
fluctuated throughout. The most noticeable changes can be seen in the
production
of coal when it dropped sharply from approximately 120
million
tonnes
in 1983 to a little bit more than 40
million
tonnes
in 1984 before climbing again to above 100
million
tonnes
in 1986. These later figures start dropping simultaneously in 1987 from around 100
million
tonnes
to hit the lowest point at under 40
million
in the
last
year.
likewise
, petroleum
production
declined from around 100
million
in the first year to approximately 80
million
tonnes
at the end
. the least noticeable change can be noticed in natural gas
production
which fluctuated from roughly 70
million
to a little bit less than that in the
last
year.
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