You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently had a negative experience at a local restaurant. Write a letter to the owner of the restaurant. In your letter, •describe what made your experience negative •describe what would have made the experience better •ask him for an apology and a refund Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Mossies Management,
I am writing to express my
dissapointment
regarding a recent dining experience at your Correct your spelling
disappointment
restaurant
on March 12th. It was my and wife's
10th anniversary, and we were very excited to celebrate it at your Correct pronoun usage
my wife's
restaurant
as it was recommended by one of my collegue
. Correct your spelling
colleague
colleagues
However
, our experience fell short of expectation
.
We ordered Cheesy Pasta from the menu, and we were served plain pasta without any seasoning on it. Despite politely requesting a replacement, we met with rudeness from Fix the agreement mistake
expectations
Correct pronoun usage
one on
on
your staff, Martha who Change preposition
of
denied
to replace the dish. Needless to say, Verb problem
refused
this
interaction marred our anniversary and our precious time.
I kindly request an apology for disrespectful
behaviour we encountered at your Correct article usage
the disrespectful
restaurant
and a refund for the misrepersented
dish. Correct your spelling
misrepresented
Additionally
, I request you to please train the staff to be polite towards their customers as this
impacts the image of the restaurant
as well.
I look forward to your prompt response and resolution of this
matter.
Sincerely,
JoshSubmitted by khadiii60 on
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coherence cohesion
Consider breaking down the paragraphs for a more structured approach. This can enhance the clarity and readability.
task achievement
Ensure to check spelling errors, such as 'misrepersented' should be 'misrepresented' and 'dissapointment' should be 'disappointment'.
task achievement
Clear and polite tone used throughout the letter, which is suitable for the task.
coherence cohesion
Logical structure with a clear beginning, middle, and end.