The charts below show the propotions of british, students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the propotions of british, students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts below illustrate the percentages of United Kingdom students at a single University in England capable
to speak
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of speaking
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not only English but
also
other foreign languages in 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, most of the students at
this
University speak English and other language in 2000 and 2010. in 2000, 80% of auditors can express themselves in other languages
such
30
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as 30
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% in Spanish only, 15% in French only and another language, 10% in two other languages, and 10% in Germany.
On the other hand
, in 2010, the number of students who speak other
language
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languages
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rose to 90% . the number of
only
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apply
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Spanish speakers increased from 30% in 2000 to 35% in 2010.
furthermore
,
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