friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties Write at least 150 words. You do NOT nee
Dear mukta,
Hope you
Correct pronoun usage
I hope
this
letter finds you in radiant health and soul. I need your assistance to take care of my pet and home while
I'm on away. Actually, I plan for one
Correct determiner usage
a
week
trip to Correct your spelling
one-week
goa
with my family. We Correct your spelling
go
travel
through plan and unfortunately I Wrong verb form
travelled
unable
to book Add a missing verb
was unable
ticket
for my dog named Add an article
a ticket
the ticket
tommy
so I Change the capitalization
Tommy
tummy
have
to Wrong verb form
had
left
them Wrong verb form
leave
home
. That's why I'm considering you because you are Change preposition
at home
only
one here I trust completely.
I Correct article usage
the only
prepare
a list of household Wrong verb form
have prepared
shores
that will assist you during it. Correct your spelling
chores
Tommy
goes for walk
twice a day before having Correct article usage
a walk
meal
. I will pack all Add an article
a meal
seven day
Add a hyphen
seven-day
meal
for Fix the agreement mistake
meals
tommy
in the cupboard with the labels of Change the capitalization
Tommy
day
. You just give them Add an article
the day
accordingly
. As tommy
take Change the capitalization
Tommy
bath
in the evening and Correct article usage
a bath
give
them a dose of medicine before bed that I mention in the list.
Correct subject-verb agreement
gives
You don't
worry about the cleaning and stuff of the house, I will book a cleaner for a week. You just make sure all the lights and doors are closed in the night so that nobody has come to Correct pronoun usage
Don't
house
during your absence.
If you have any Add an article
the house
query
about Fix the agreement mistake
queries
tommy
and other stuff feel free to call me Change the capitalization
Tommy
at
my cellphone 6557843. In case you Change preposition
on
unable
to contact me, pls visit Add a missing verb
are unable
to
the Change preposition
apply
neighbor
next to my home they will happily help you.
I am thankful to you for Change the spelling
neighbour
this
favour. We will plan soon for get together
.
Correct your spelling
get-together
Your
sincerely,
AmanCorrect the word
Yours
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coherence cohesion
Work on the logical structure of your letter by ensuring a clear and smooth flow of ideas. For example, introducing all topics in one place before delving into details.
coherence cohesion
Consider breaking down sentences to avoid run-ons, especially when providing instructions or additional information about tasks and contact details.
task achievement
The writing tone is very appropriate for a letter to a friend. It's friendly and respectful.
task achievement
The letter provides a complete response, covering all necessary points such as contact details, instructions for pet care, and household duties.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are effectively used to create a personal touch in the letter.