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Writing Samples
Band 5.5

friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties Write at least 150 words. You do NOT nee

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Dear mukta,
Hope you
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I hope
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this
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 letter finds you in radiant health and soul. I need your assistance to take care of my pet and home
while
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 I'm on away. Actually, I plan for
one
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a
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week
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one-week
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 trip to
goa
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go
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 with my family. We
travel
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travelled
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 through plan and unfortunately I
unable
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was unable
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 to book
ticket
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a ticket
the ticket
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 for my dog named
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tommy
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Tommy
tummy
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 so I
have
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had
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 to
left
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leave
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 them
home
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at home
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. That's why I'm considering you because you are
only
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the only
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 one here I trust completely. I
prepare
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have prepared
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 a list of household
shores
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chores
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 that will assist you during it.
Tommy
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 goes for
walk
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a walk
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 twice a day before having
meal
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a meal
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. I will pack all
seven day
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seven-day
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meal
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meals
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 for
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tommy
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Tommy
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 in the cupboard with the labels of
day
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the day
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. You just give them
accordingly
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. As
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tommy
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Tommy
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 take
bath
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a bath
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 in the evening and
give
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gives
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 them a dose of medicine before bed that I mention in the list.
You don't
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Don't
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 worry about the cleaning and stuff of the house, I will book a cleaner for a week. You just make sure all the lights and doors are closed in the night so that nobody has come to
house
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the house
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 during your absence. If you have any
query
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queries
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 about
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tommy
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Tommy
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 and other stuff feel free to call me
at
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on
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 my cellphone 6557843. In case you
unable
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are unable
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 to contact me, pls visit
to
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apply
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the
neighbor
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neighbour
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 next to my home they will happily help you. I am thankful to you for
this
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 favour. We will plan soon for get
together
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get-together
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.
Your
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Yours
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 sincerely, Aman

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coherence cohesion
Work on the logical structure of your letter by ensuring a clear and smooth flow of ideas. For example, introducing all topics in one place before delving into details.
coherence cohesion
Consider breaking down sentences to avoid run-ons, especially when providing instructions or additional information about tasks and contact details.
task achievement
The writing tone is very appropriate for a letter to a friend. It's friendly and respectful.
task achievement
The letter provides a complete response, covering all necessary points such as contact details, instructions for pet care, and household duties.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are effectively used to create a personal touch in the letter.
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