The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The figure down
exampes
the methods and tools Correct your spelling
illustrates
that
used in the Correct pronoun usage
apply
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cement creating
steps , and how Add a hyphen
cement-creating
cement
is used to maling concrete for building purposes .
Both Use synonyms
cement
and concrete Use synonyms
production
are used in structure , we can find it from sand and stones from mounten . Both have several steps to produce the material which can be Use synonyms
stronge
material can used Correct your spelling
strong
stronger
in
many purposes for Change preposition
for
buliding
. Correct your spelling
building
Such
as Linking Words
,
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apply
Bridge
, Fix the agreement mistake
bridges
wall
, Fix the agreement mistake
walls
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and foundation
foundation
.
the Fix the agreement mistake
foundations
cement
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production
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stages
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stage
it
start after Correct pronoun usage
apply
buring
the sand material from Correct your spelling
burying
natureal
, we Correct your spelling
natural
have
mix the limestone and clay together , after that Unnecessary verb
apply
cruch
it Correct your spelling
crunch
crush
to
Change preposition
into
small
,Correct article usage
a small
aterial
called powder Correct your spelling
material
Correct your spelling
and
amd
mix it with Correct your spelling
and
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rotating
rooting
rotting
rototing
heater Correct article usage
a rototing
then
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sepored
to by Correct your spelling
reported
separated
deported
grinder
to get the final shape for material Correct article usage
a grinder
cahhed
' Correct your spelling
cached
cement
'
after Use synonyms
Correct your spelling
that
thate
it is ready to put Add a comma
thate,
it
in bags to sell Correct pronoun usage
apply
it
in the market .
the concrete Correct pronoun usage
apply
production
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start
after Correct subject-verb agreement
starts
finsh
all Correct your spelling
finishing
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cement
stages and Correct article usage
the cement
get
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getting
cement
, you put 15% from Use synonyms
cement
Use synonyms
with
10% from water and 25%from sand .
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apply
Finally
, put 50%from gravel . put all those Linking Words
material
together in Fix the agreement mistake
materials
concrete
mixer and mix it , you will get the final Correct article usage
a concrete
produce
called ' concrete Correct your spelling
product
production
'.
Note Use synonyms
: Gravel
is small stonesCorrect your spelling
that gravel
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