The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the amounts of
fish
, lamb, beef
and chicken
in a European country from 1979 to 2004. Chicken
has overtaken beef
as the most popular meat
in this
European country, with about 250 grams
per person per week in 2004. Fish
experienced a slightly
decrease, remaining the lowest consumption over 25 years.
It’s clear that In 1979, Change the adverb
slight
beef
has
the highest consumption about 220 Wrong verb form
had
grams
.Beside
the Replace the word
Besides
amounts
of Fix the agreement mistake
amount
fish
is less than a quarter of beef
(over 50 grams
). Lamb and chicken
were eaten quite
similar quantities around 150 Change preposition
in quite
grams
.
However
, during the 25-year period, the beef
and lamb witness
the same trend, dramatically dropping about 100 Wrong verb form
witnessed
grams
to 100 grams
per person per week and 50 grams
respectively. Meanwhile Chicken
was the only one
Correct pronoun usage
apply
meat
saw
Correct pronoun usage
that saw
an
opposite trend, has rapidly Correct article usage
the
risen
by 100 Wrong verb form
rose
grams
, Correct word choice
and overtook
overtook
Wrong verb form
overtaking
beef
in 1989 as the salable meat
.Even though fish
was the less popular meat
but
the consumption levels were most stable.Correct word choice
apply
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Contractions: Don't use contractions.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, beef, chicken, meat, grams with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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