The charts below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart depicts the proportion of expenditure which was used for exporting different types of
goods
across the year 2015 and 2016.
Overall
, it can be observed that in the year 2016, there were more funds in each category, with the exception of gems and jewellery.
Additionally
, petroleum
products
and engineered
goods
were the highest figures in the chart. Regarding petroleum
products
and engineered
goods
, the spending on these
products
was roughly $60
billion
in 2016.
Whereas
, the expenditure on these exporting
goods
at the year of 2015 was under $60
billion
, with more money on petroleum
products
. As for Gems and jewellery, more money was spent on these
products
in 2015, with the recording at slightly over $40
billion
. Meanwhile, expenditure on exporting was exactly $40
billion
. Moving on to the lowest figures, the payment used for agricultural procedures was slightly over $30
billion
in both years. In terms of the textiles, more fund was spent on these stocks which was recorded at about $30
billion
.
Otherwise
, just about $25
billion
was used on the cargo in 2015
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