The charts below show the percentage of males and females who worked in three different sectors in two countries in 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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As we can see in the Info-Graphic, There are 4 charts that show us men's and women's
percentages
of working in different parts of a Use synonyms
country
. Maximom workers Use synonyms
work
in Use synonyms
services
and minimom are in Use synonyms
agriculture
. The percentage of men is more than women in industries. Agricultures Use synonyms
percentages
are the least in all 4 piecharts. We can see increasing Use synonyms
percentages
in every 4 piecharts from A to B. Use synonyms
Agriculture
's number is at its highest in males in Use synonyms
country
A.
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To begin
with, In Linking Words
country
A, There are 15% of males who Use synonyms
works
in industry, 29% in Correct subject-verb agreement
work
agriculture
and 54% in Use synonyms
services
and Use synonyms
percentages
for the females are 8% in industry, 49% in Use synonyms
services
and 42% in Use synonyms
agriculture
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, in Linking Words
country
B, males Use synonyms
number is
32% of industries, 65 per cent for Verb problem
are
services
and three per cent for Use synonyms
agriculture
. Use synonyms
Also
, 11% of women Linking Words
work
in industries, 49% of them Use synonyms
work
in Use synonyms
services
and only per cent of them Use synonyms
work
in Use synonyms
agriculture
.Use synonyms
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