The charts below show the percentage of males and females who worked in three different sectors in two countries in 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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As we can see in the Info-Graphic, There are 4 charts that show us men's and women's
percentages
of working in different parts of a country
. Maximom workers work
in services
and minimom are in agriculture
. The percentage of men is more than women in industries. Agricultures percentages
are the least in all 4 piecharts. We can see increasing percentages
in every 4 piecharts from A to B. Agriculture
's number is at its highest in males in country
A.
To begin
with, In country
A, There are 15% of males who works
in industry, 29% in Correct subject-verb agreement
work
agriculture
and 54% in services
and percentages
for the females are 8% in industry, 49% in services
and 42% in agriculture
. Moreover
, in country
B, males number is
32% of industries, 65 per cent for Verb problem
are
services
and three per cent for agriculture
. Also
, 11% of women work
in industries, 49% of them work
in services
and only per cent of them work
in agriculture
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