The diagram shows a possible future means of home energy production. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows a possible future means of home energy production. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The process illustrates how home energy production can be made in the future.
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, it can be seen that by burning and utilizing the natural
gas
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from the field, electricity can be produced by landowners. First of all, farmers who work in agricultural fields can fill 3 quarters of the steel tank with disposable materials and water which later will be burned in
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container. By burning the combination of compost and water, methane
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is produced which
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will be transferred to the vertical storage via some pipelines. In the second step, the methane
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which was stored in the storage, is sent to the compressor where it will be ready for transfering to the huge combustion engine. After the initial preparation of the methane
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transformation from fields to the combustion engine, the compressed
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which was burnt in the combustion will spin the shaft which is connected to the engine in order to produce electrical energy in the generator. After that,
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energy source will be transferred to the battery where it can be stored for the next process.
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of
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process, the electricity will be carried to houses by electrical transmission lines.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words gas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • renewable energy
  • sustainability
  • solar panels
  • energy storage
  • wind turbine
  • geothermal
  • energy efficiency
  • carbon footprint
  • grid
  • biomass
  • photovoltaic
  • smart meter
  • energy consumption
  • insulation
  • heat pump
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