Some people believe that it is important for children not to play video games but to spend time outdoors. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is irrefutable that today's world

opt

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a

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sedentary

life style

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lifestyle

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rather than doing physical exercise. Some masses

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children

indulge

theirself

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themselves

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in physical activity more than playing video

games

and spend more

time

indoors. I strongly agree with

this

phenomenon and explain my viewpoint in upcoming paragraphs.

Firstly

,Youngsters

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to stay home and spend

time

to play

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games

and

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themself

to interact

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in interacting

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with social media. It

effects

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their health drastically.

Secondly

,

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physical activity and

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sedentary leads to

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palthora

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plethora

of health issues like obesity, diabetes, stress, depression etc. The trend of depression increasing at

alarming

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rate

due to

Less interaction with people.

Moreover

, Spending most of the

time

at

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playing video

games

and watching television has inclined individuals towards isolation, loneliness etc.

However

,

children

are

future

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of the nation. So it's equally significant for parents, teachers and authorities to pay attention

on

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this

trend and

provides

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best

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resolution to tackle

with

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this

problem. Parents should opt

good

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healthy habits like walking, jogging, sleep at

time

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and spend more and more

time

with family. Because

,

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children

always imitate

parents

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their parents

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.

Additionally

, Schools should encourage students to take part in

games

by organizing regular competitions.

Also

, Governments spend more money to

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parks and playgrounds for

children

. To recapitulate, It is very imperative that students pay attention to

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most of

the

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time

to do

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outdoor activities that assist them

to become

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in becoming

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mentally and physically healthier rather than playing

games

and

stay

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staying

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at home.