The line graph below shows the number of monthly active users of some social network and messaging services between 2010 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the number of monthly active users of some social network and messaging services between 2010 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph demonstrates
of
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apply
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people who
are being
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have
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used
sites
of social
network
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networks
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in
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multiple times.
Coampred
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Compared
between massaging and working services from 2010 to 2015.
Overall
, the largest
sites
of percentages that have been used by proportion is
one
sites
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site
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in 2014 and five
sites
is the smallest number.
Although
,
highest
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a highest
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user
in 2015
is
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was
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one
sites
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site
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and
lowest
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the lowest
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user
is
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was
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five
sites
. From the comparison of people using the
soical
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social
network for monthly
actives
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average is between no
sites
and two
sites
. From starting, in
a
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year of 2014 no
sites
has been
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were
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use
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using
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for
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influence 22% of
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the user
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user
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users
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.
One
sites
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user
is
extrememly
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extremely
increased to 36%,
then
declined to 23% on two
sites
.
however
,
number
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a number
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of users dramatically decreased to 2% in between three
sites
, four
sites
and
fives
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five
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sites
of the services.
On the other hand
,
2015
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in 2015
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, the
amount
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number
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of people who are using
network
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the network
a network
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,
beginning
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began
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at 23% on no
sites
, up to 26%
in addition
in
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to
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one
sites
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site's
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user
service.
Verb problem
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despites
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despite
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of that,
sharplily
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sharply
down among
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • monthly active users
  • social network services
  • messaging services
  • time frame
  • observe a trend
  • fluctuation
  • noticeable increase
  • significant decrease
  • peak
  • trough
  • exponential growth
  • relative decline
  • steady rise
  • dramatic fall
  • comparative analysis
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