The line graph below shows the number of monthly active users of some social network and messaging services between 2010 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram gives information on how many
people
(in percentage) used multiple social media platforms every month, compared by
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to
Correct article usage
the numbers
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
sites
and the years
of
2014 and 2015.
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apply
Overall
, over the two
years
, the tendencies are quite identical. Most of the users were engaged with one social networking site, and the user number decreases
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decreased
while
the website number increases
.
Looking closely at the percentages Wrong verb form
increased
in
each year, Change preposition
apply
people
who signed up for just one social media account accounted for the largest proportion in 2014 and 2015, at 36% and 28% respectively. The second and third highest numbers were very similar in both years
which were the percentages of the users who were active on none or two
sites
, between 21% to 24%. Although
there is an upward trend that more cyber citizens used more than two
sites
in 2015 than that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
of
2014, less than 10% Change preposition
in
people
used four or five Change preposition
of people
sites
over the two
years
. The smallest proportions composed
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are composed
by
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of
people
who used five sites
, to be more precise, 2% in 2014 and 4% in 2015.Submitted by carriexue23 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, sites, years, two with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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