The diagram below shows a possible future means of home energy production. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows a possible future means of home energy production.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the various steps and stages of producing electricity for home use.  It can be clearly seen that home
energy
production has five stages before reaching people's houses
such
as compost fermentation,
gas
storage
, compressing,
gas
combustion, generation,
energy
storage
and the final step is
energy
distribution. The process commences with the
steal
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stolen
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tank filling with compost
for instance
leaves, food, scrapes and water. After that, methane
gas
goes out of the tank and passes through
gas
pipes. Methane
stored
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is stored
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in a large
storage
before
gas
compression.
Then
, compressed
gas
passes into pipes and arrives at the combustion engine in order to make sure that methane is burning well. Mechanical
energy
out enters the generator machine in order to produce
the
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apply
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electricity for home consumption. Following the previous steps, the electric
energy
stored
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is stored
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in a battery which is called electrical
energy
storage
. The final stage of the process is when the electricity is distributed to individual houses in order to be used for several purposes.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, gas, storage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • renewable energy
  • sustainability
  • solar panels
  • energy storage
  • wind turbine
  • geothermal
  • energy efficiency
  • carbon footprint
  • grid
  • biomass
  • photovoltaic
  • smart meter
  • energy consumption
  • insulation
  • heat pump
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