The line graph below shows the number of monthly active users of some social network and messaging services between 2010 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table illustrates, how many people used social networks and messaging services actively in 2010 and 2015.

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, it's clear that people are mostly interested in

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section,

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, when the total of sites starts to increase

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the proportion of users falls.

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, in 2014 rate of people who don't use any section is 22% and it's higher than the interest in 2015.

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, during the period of

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site in 2014 proportion of users reached the peak point in the line chart by 36% in 2014,

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, in 2015 highest interest was

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obtained by a single site.

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, when the number of sections increased by

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the interest of users fell in both 2014 and 2015,

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this

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time the ratio in 2015 was higher than in 2014.

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, when the number of sections still increases

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the proportions go down.

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, when the number of sites is 5, both years have the lowest percentage that they have ever achieved, 2% in 2014, and twice as much in 2015 as in 2014.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

178 words

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