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Some people are making new friends by socializing network websites and internet chat rooms. Some people say that this is a good thing. Other people opine that people should make new friends by face to face chat. Discuss both views and given your own opinion

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modern
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individualitic
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individualistic
individuality
 world, many argue that finding new
friends
 on online platforms has many good aspects,
however
, based on some people's perspective, making
friends
 by live chat is better. I am more
resolite
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resolute
 in my belief that
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human human-beings
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human-beings
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beings
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 can find ideal
friends
 in real
life
,
while
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 endorse that
areturm
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return
 websites and internet chat rooms
has
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 enough advantages for meeting and marriage many people. first of all,
internet
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 plays a crucial role in our
life
, especially for communicating
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athers
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others
 everyone can chat with any people who have
a
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plenty of
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hobby
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,
needs
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and needs
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with
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 each other. Take an example from active users of social media, who share their part of
life
, thinks,
ideas
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and ideas
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, they can easily find
friends
 who have
same
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the same
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 interests
with
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 them.
However
, friendships in real
life
 are
resiliant
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resilient
 and strange rather than online relationships.
on the other hand
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social networking sites
  • internet chat rooms
  • face-to-face interaction
  • emotional bonding
  • physical presence
  • non-verbal communication
  • geographical limitations
  • accessibility
  • diversity
  • trust-building
  • social anxiety
  • convenience
  • potential for deceit
  • time constraints
  • balanced approach
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