The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart illustrates the number of males and females from different generations who
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, in Australia, in 2010 .
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groups from 15 to 65 and over . According to
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men
have the highest percentage of all the dye
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for the
age
of 15 to 24 the women
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women
have 52.8 . While
men
47.7
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were 47.7
men
there were almost equal between men
and women
under age
65 and over. The graph shows a slight difference which is just 0.1 percent . Moreover
, the age
group of Age
between men
and women
from 25 to 34 men
had 48.4 while
women
had 42.2.
Finally
, Women
and men
from 35 to 64 the men
who did regular physical exercise were more than Women
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