The two bar charts show the proportion of 14-16 year-old students studying a modern foreign language in an English Speaking country and the top three popular foreign languages. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The statistics regarding 14-
16 year-old
learners acquiring a modern foreign Add a hyphen
16-year-old
language
in a country where English is a an
official Choose an article
an
language
is
illustrated Correct subject-verb agreement
are
along side
Correct your spelling
alongside
with
the languages they chose in 1984 and 2007.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, it is clear that
learning a foreign language
is more common among female students. In addition
, it is clear that
Spanish is the least studied language
.
Broadly speaking, the ranking of the studied items remains unchanged in both charts, creating a somewhat steady pattern across the studied years with women participating in language
learning with French, German and Spanish respectively.
Looking into detail, it is obvious that language
learning saw a general fall in the number of female students from 50% in 1998 to 40% in 2007. The same applies to the percentage of male students whose participation rate experienced a slight fall in 2007. Regarding the languages chosen, the fluctuations are more noticable
with French experiencing a sharp fall from 50% in 1998 to 20% in 2007 the other two languages, German and Spanish, Correct your spelling
noticeable
follow
by almost 10% in 2007 with German being slightly higher.Wrong verb form
followed
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