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The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph compares the populations of two countries,
India
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 and
China
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 from 2000 until 2050. From the present until 2050, the data rely on projections.
Overall
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, it is shown that
China
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's
population
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 increased until now
while
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 it is projected that it will decline until 2050.
On the other hand
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, we can observe that
India
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's
population
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 increased until now and it
also
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 will increase by 2050.
Firstly
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, the
population
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 of
China
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 started at 1,250
billion
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 in 2000 and peaked at 1,450
billion
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 at present. It remains almost steady until 2040 when it will start a slight decline until 2050. The
population
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 of
India
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 started at 1,000
billion
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 in 2000 and it continued an upward trend until now when it reached 1,400
billion
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.
However
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, the projections of
India
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's
population
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 show that it will increase until 2050 when it will peak at 1,600
billion
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.
Finally
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, we can see that there is a similar point in the graph. In 2030 it is projected that
India
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 and
China
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's populations will be the same at 1,450
billion
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 approximately.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words india, china, population, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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