The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

These two pie

charts

provide a Comparison of

Energy

Production in France. Both pie

charts

link between years and comparison of multiple sources of

Energy

.

According to

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consumption

of gas in 2005 was bigger than

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in 1995. It can clearly seen that petro

consumption

has declined by about 10% in 10 years.

Also

, gas

consumption

rose by about 1.3%.

Furthermore

, coal

also

increased 2%.

While

Nuclear boomed to 10.10%. As same, the other source of

energy

has rais to 9.10%. Regarding the given data, it is remarkable that there is a leap in the process of finding other sources of

energy

that are friendly to

environment

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and that

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sick

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. The lowest point of consuming

energy

was other resources which reached 4.9% in 1995. In reference to both pie

charts

, to noticeable

figures

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there is a great movement to use another type of

energy

to help the environment by reducing gas.