The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
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These two pie
charts
provide a Comparison of Energy
Production in France. Both pie charts
link between years and comparison of multiple sources of Energy
. According to
the
both Remove the article
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charts
consumption
of gas in 2005 was bigger than Correct article usage
the consumption
consumption
in 1995.
It can clearly seen that petro Correct article usage
the consumption
consumption
has declined by about 10% in 10 years. Also
, gas consumption
rose by about 1.3%. Furthermore
, coal also
increased 2%. While
Nuclear boomed to 10.10%. As same, the other source of energy
has rais to 9.10%.
Regarding the given data, it is remarkable that there is a leap in the process of finding other sources of energy
that are friendly to environment
and that Add an article
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The lowest point of consuming Correct word choice
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energy
was other resources which reached 4.9% in 1995. In reference to both pie charts
, to noticeable figures
there is a great movement to use another type of Add a comma
figures,
energy
to help the environment by reducing gas.Submitted by hanadi.alajmi92 on
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