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Many employers are employing people with good social skills as well as good qualifications. Do you agree or disagree that good social skills are as important as good qualifications to succeed in a job?

#employers #people #skills #qualifications #job
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 job, but some of them usually neglect the importance of social skills. Despite some
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 working ability is the most important thing. The following essay will illustrate two of
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 reasons why I personally believe that
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social ability is the only thing that has been taught since
people
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people
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business occasions, they must have the possibility to negotiate with other enterprises, and it has a lot of things to do with
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social skills; so that could make those entrepreneurs convinced.
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people
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you have,” “university’s fame,” ”how productive you are,” etc. A number of
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 already missed what is the key point in their lives, but it doesn’t mean that good qualification is meaningless. The reason why
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 these background qualifications is because
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education
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 background and working experiences ought to be the main, but the abilities that how to socialize, communicate, and negotiate are vital as well.
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task achievement
To improve your task achievement, try to provide more specific examples to support your points. For instance, you could mention scenarios from famous companies or notable leaders where social skills played a crucial role in their success.
coherence cohesion
In terms of coherence and cohesion, work on improving the logical structure a bit more. Make sure each paragraph transitions smoothly to the next and that all points are clearly linked to your main thesis.
coherence cohesion
Your essay has a clear introduction and conclusion, which provides a solid structure for your argument.
task achievement
You have a complete response to the task, addressing both qualifications and social skills in the context of job success.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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