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The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the distribution of various types of
energy
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 production in France for the years 1995 and 2005.
Overall
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, coal and gas were the predominant sources of
energy
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 in both years, collectively accounting for nearly half of the total production. A closer examination reveals that the proportions of each
energy
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 source remained relatively stable over the decade.
However
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, there were notable shifts in specific
energy
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 types. Petrol's share experienced a significant decline, dropping by 10% from 1995 to 2005.
In contrast
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, nuclear
energy
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 saw a substantial increase, rising by 10.10% over the same period.
Additionally
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, the contribution of renewable
energy
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 showed a slight increase, indicating a growing interest in sustainable
energy
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 sources. In summary,
while
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 the
overall
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energy
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 production landscape in France remained consistent, significant changes were observed in the shares of petrol and nuclear
energy
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, with nuclear
energy
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 gaining prominence at the expense of petrol.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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