The chart below show percentage of water used in different sectors in Sydney, Australia in 1997 and 2007.
The pie chart data on the rate of total 2007 1997
water
usage in the 1997 and 2007 years in Sydney.
Overall
, in 1997, while
the spending of water
on the food industry
, manufacturing and building industry
decreased inChange the article
the
year
, the percentage of service industry
and household use have on the contrary
increased.
To begin
with the food industry
, where there was the biggest percentage of water
usage, in 1997, it was 48%, which in 2007 year
became 41%. In manufacturing sphere, there was 15% in the 1997 year
, however
, in the 2007 year
, it decreased to 11%. And regarding building works, in the 2007 year
it was only 2%, although
in the 1997 year
was 5%.
Then
in the service industry
, in 2007 people spent 25% on water
, in spite of in 1997 they spent only 13%. Regarding households, inChange the article
the
year
, water
usage in this
part was only 19 per cent, but nevertheless
, as we can see, this
number increased to exactly 21 per cent.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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