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The chart below show percentages of water used in different sectors in Sydney, Australia in 1997 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below show percentages of water used in different sectors in Sydney, Australia in 1997 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart compares the proportion of
water
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 applied in numerous sectors in Sydney, Australia in 1997 and 2007.
Overall
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, the most
water
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 was used for the food
industry
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 and the lowest was utilised for the building
industry
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 in both years. In 1997 the most
water
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 was used by the food
industry
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, at 48%. In terms of
service
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industry
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 and manufacturing, the percentages of
water
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 utilised were relatively similar, at 13% for
service
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industry
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 and, at 15% for manufacturing. Regarding the building
industry
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, the
water
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 was used the lowest, at 5%. The household was used, at 19% by
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. In 2007
while
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, the most
water
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 was used by the food
industry
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, at 41% and the lowest was utilised by the building
industry
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, at 21%. In terms of
service
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industry
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 and household use, the percentages of
water
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 use were relatively same, at 25% for
service
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industry
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 and, at 21% for household use. The percentage of
water
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 utilised for manufacturing was, 11%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, industry, service with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • sector
  • increase
  • decrease
  • comparison
  • trend
  • water usage
  • management policies
  • decade
  • implications
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