The line graph displays
the
Japan’s Correct article usage
apply
population
of different ages starting and forecasting in the Use synonyms
years
of 1940 to 2040.
Use synonyms
Overall
, there is a Linking Words
significantly
rise in the Change the word
significant
population
of 65+from the Use synonyms
year
of 1960 Use synonyms
along with
in the age of 0-14 Linking Words
years
old fell drastically in over the Use synonyms
years
.
Use synonyms
Firstly
, From the Linking Words
year
Use synonyms
of
1960-Change preposition
apply
70
the Add a comma
70,
population
Use synonyms
aging
from 0-14 grew slightly just over a third Replace the word
aged
however
, it fell to the level of just under Linking Words
one third
in the following Add a hyphen
one-third
year
and it remained stable to the next. The people; who were at the age of 65+, grew Use synonyms
steady
from Change the word
steadily
1960s
to Change the article
the 1960s
90s
Correct article usage
the 90s
following
Wrong verb form
followed
with
15-64 Change preposition
by
years
old being fluctuated.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Linking Words
however
despite the Linking Words
population
remaining at a stable rate, it is predicated the Use synonyms
population
of 0-14 to 15-64 Use synonyms
years
Use synonyms
old’s
will experience Change noun form
old
decline
significantly Correct article usage
a decline
moreover
, Japan’s oldest Linking Words
population
of 65+ would see a surge by nearly two fifth in the four decades from the Use synonyms
year
of 2000.Use synonyms
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