The charts below show the percentage of the labour force by occupation in Japan and India in 1960 with projection for 2040.

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Japan’s

population

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of different ages starting and forecasting in the

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of 1940 to 2040.

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, there is a

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rise in the

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of 65+from the

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of 1960

along with

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in the age of 0-14

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old fell drastically in over the

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.

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of

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1960-

70

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the

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aging

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from 0-14 grew slightly just over a third

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, it fell to the level of just under

one third

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in the following

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and it remained stable to the next. The people; who were at the age of 65+, grew

steady

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from

1960s

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the 1960s

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to

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the 90s

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following

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with

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15-64

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old being fluctuated.

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despite the

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remaining at a stable rate, it is predicated the

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of 0-14 to 15-64

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old’s

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will experience

decline

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a decline

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significantly

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, Japan’s oldest

population

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of 65+ would see a surge by nearly two fifth in the four decades from the

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of 2000.