The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the relationship between
age
and
crime
in the
last
year. The pie chart depicts the proportion of four different types of
crime
in the United Kingdom.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the 12 to 28
age
group
people
were highly involved in
crimes
.
Whereas
, in the pie chart violent
crime
showed a higher ratio as compared to others
while
public
crimes
recorded the lowest percentage. In the
last
year, the
crime
rate started from the
age
of 8 and reached its peak at 20. From less than 10 and soared to 70 or at the
age
of 20 it was become 80. Meanwhile, gradually decreases with
age
. The
crimes
were 60 at 24 years and
then
dramatically fell to 20 at 28 after that there was a moderate decline and after 40 years of
age
Add a comma
age,
show examples
the
people
were not committed the
crime
. If looking towards the pie chart,
crime
is divided into violent
crime
, property
crime
, drug
crime
and public order
crime
in a particular country. Drug use
together with
property
crimes
was shared approximately less than a quarter 22% and 23% respectively.
However
, violence among
people
in the UK witnessed 46%.
Although
public order
crime
was lower among Britain
people
it was only 9%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words age, crime, people, crimes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • The line graph depicts
  • The pie chart illustrates
  • reveals
  • displays
  • depicts
  • the trend of
  • the overall crime rate
  • steadily decreased
  • the distribution of
  • different types of crime
  • prevalent
  • accounts for
  • the most common crime
  • followed by
  • make up
  • a smaller proportion of
  • the total crimes
  • a smaller percentage
  • approximately
  • the remaining percentage
  • It is important to note that
  • reflects
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