The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the relationship between
age
and crime
in the last
year. The pie chart depicts the proportion of four different types of crime
in the United Kingdom.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the 12 to 28 age
group people
were highly involved in crimes
. Whereas
, in the pie chart violent crime
showed a higher ratio as compared to others while
public crimes
recorded the lowest percentage.
In the last
year, the crime
rate started from the age
of 8 and reached its peak at 20. From less than 10 and soared to 70 or at the age
of 20 it was become 80. Meanwhile, gradually decreases with age
. The crimes
were 60 at 24 years and then
dramatically fell to 20 at 28 after that there was a moderate decline and after 40 years of age
the Add a comma
age,
people
were not committed the crime
.
If looking towards the pie chart, crime
is divided into violent crime
, property crime
, drug crime
and public order crime
in a particular country. Drug use together with
property crimes
was shared approximately less than a quarter 22% and 23% respectively. However
, violence among people
in the UK witnessed 46%. Although
public order crime
was lower among Britain people
it was only 9%.Submitted by seharfazal9 on
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