The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The figure of
two
pie
charts
illustrate
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the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages
in addition
to English, in 2000 and 2010.
Overall
,
two
charts
were demonstrated by percentage and divided into 6 sections which were no other
language
, French only,
German
only, Spanish only, another
language
and
two
other
language
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. In
the
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each pie
charts
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,
it is clear that
Spanish was the most spoken
language
in a decade. The lowest was
German
only and
two
other
language
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in 2000,
while
it was
German
only after 10 years.
First,
the proportion of bilingual and
German
speakers did not vary over the course of ten years, staying at 10%.
Additionally
, there has been a 5% decrease in the popularity of another
language
section, with French being 5% less popular in 2010 than it was in 2000.
Second,
compared to 20% at the beginning of the assessment, it is evident that just 10% of students have not picked up a new
language
during
this
time.
Additionally
, the largest percentage in the
charts
indicates that students found conversing in Spanish to be more fascinating than other languages;
this
proportion increased from 5% to 35% in 2010.
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  • proportions
  • multilingual
  • linguistic competence
  • significant
  • trend
  • increase/decrease
  • stable
  • popularity
  • relatively
  • decade
  • compare/contrast
  • survey
  • data
  • fluent
  • proficient
  • bilingual
  • predominant
  • minority
  • emerge
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