The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The figure of
two
pie charts
illustrate
the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages Change the verb form
illustrates
in addition
to English, in 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, two
charts
were demonstrated by percentage and divided into 6 sections which were no other language
, French only, German
only, Spanish only, another language
and two
other language
. In Change to a plural noun
languages
the
each pie Remove the article
apply
charts
, Fix the agreement mistake
chart
it is clear that
Spanish was the most spoken language
in a decade. The lowest was German
only and two
other language
in 2000, Change to a plural noun
languages
while
it was German
only after 10 years.
First,
the proportion of bilingual and German
speakers did not vary over the course of ten years, staying at 10%. Additionally
, there has been a 5% decrease in the popularity of another language
section, with French being 5% less popular in 2010 than it was in 2000.
Second,
compared to 20% at the beginning of the assessment, it is evident that just 10% of students have not picked up a new language
during this
time. Additionally
, the largest percentage in the charts
indicates that students found conversing in Spanish to be more fascinating than other languages; this
proportion increased from 5% to 35% in 2010.Submitted by buyabuya201 on
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