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The table illustrates the changes in the
households
based on types
of Correct article usage
the types
households
and family
in Canada in the years 1984, 1994, 2004, 2014 and 2020.
There are various types of Fix the agreement mistake
families
housings
in Canada, which Fix the agreement mistake
housing
includes
Correct subject-verb agreement
include
one person
and one-family Add a hyphen
one-person
households
. Under the family households
the Add a comma
households,
couples
are classified based on no children
, dependent children
, non-dependent children
and lone parent
. It is calculated in percentage. Overall
, the type of households
and Fix the agreement mistake
families
family
observed to be increased are one-person, Fix the agreement mistake
families
Fix the agreement mistake
couples
couple
with no Fix the agreement mistake
couples
children
and lone Fix the agreement mistake
parents
parent
over the period of years from 1984 to 2020.
Fix the agreement mistake
parents
One-person occupied
housing began Add a hyphen
One-person-occupied
with
6% in 1984, increased to 8% in 1994 peaked Change preposition
at
to
11% in 2004 and Change preposition
at
then
surged to 12% in 2014 and maintained at the same level in 2020. Couples
with no children
started-off
at 19% in 1984, mildly increased to 20% in 1994, hiked to 23% in 2004 and levelled up to 25% in 2014 and continued to remain the same until 2020. Correct your spelling
started off
Couples
with dependent children
decreased from 52% to 47% from 1984 to 1994 and then
continued to decline down
to 41% in 2004, 39% in 2014 and 36% in 2020. Change preposition
apply
Couples
with non-dependent children
remained the same 10
% in 1984 and 1994 and Change preposition
at 10
then
inclined to 11% in 2004 and later declined to 9% in 2014 and 2020. The percentage of lone parent
Fix the agreement mistake
parents
are
4% in 1984 which gradually increased to 6% in 1994, surged to 10% in 2004 and reached the maximum of 12% in 2014 and 2020.
In conclusion, over the years from 1984 to 2020 respectively a gradual increase in one-person, Wrong verb form
was
couples
with no children
and lone parent
is seen Fix the agreement mistake
parents
while
the number of couples
with dependent and non-dependent children
declined.Submitted by insighttribez on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, couples, children, parent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "surged" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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