The lie chart below shows the proportions of british students at one university in england who were able to speak other languages on addition to english, in 2000 and 2010.
The pie chart illustrates the proportions of United
kingdom
students in universities in England who have the ability to speak other languages Capitalize word
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in addition
to English, in 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, It is clear that
Spanish
became the most popular language
by far in both years. Furthermore
, pupils who were able to speak in Spanish
also
increased its
dominance, Correct pronoun usage
their
while
other languages were unstable.
The three biggest languages which students were mastering on
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it
in 2000 were Correct pronoun usage
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Spanish
, no other language
, and another language
with 30%, 20% and 15% respectively. However
, whilst Spanish
increased its number of students by 5%, no other language
faced a notable decrease to 10%. Despite an average increase of 15% to 20% in 2010, another language
replaced no other language
as the second highest of pupils number in 2010.Submitted by buyabuya201 on
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