The lie chart below shows the proportions of british students at one university in england who were able to speak other languages on addition to english, in 2000 and 2010.

The lie chart below shows the proportions of british students at one university in england who were able to speak other languages on addition to english, in 2000 and 2010.
The pie chart illustrates the proportions of United
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students in universities in England who have the ability to speak other languages
in addition
to English, in 2000 and 2010.
Overall
,
It is clear that
Spanish
became the most popular
language
by far in both years.
Furthermore
, pupils who were able to speak in
Spanish
also
increased
its
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dominance,
while
other languages were unstable. The three biggest languages which students were mastering
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it
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in 2000 were
Spanish
, no other
language
, and another
language
with 30%, 20% and 15% respectively.
However
, whilst
Spanish
increased its number of students by 5%, no other
language
faced a notable decrease to 10%. Despite an average increase of 15% to 20% in 2010, another
language
replaced no other
language
as the second highest of pupils number in 2010.
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