The lie chart below shows the proportions of british students at one university in england who were able to speak other languages on addition to english, in 2000 and 2010.
The pie chart illustrates the proportions of United
kingdom
students in universities in England who have the ability to speak other languages Capitalize word
Kingdom
in addition
to English, in 2000 and 2010.
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It is clear that
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Spanish
became the most popular Use synonyms
language
by far in both years. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, pupils who were able to speak in Linking Words
Spanish
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also
increased Linking Words
its
dominance, Correct pronoun usage
their
while
other languages were unstable.
The three biggest languages which students were mastering Linking Words
on
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apply
it
in 2000 were Correct pronoun usage
apply
Spanish
, no other Use synonyms
language
, and another Use synonyms
language
with 30%, 20% and 15% respectively. Use synonyms
However
, whilst Linking Words
Spanish
increased its number of students by 5%, no other Use synonyms
language
faced a notable decrease to 10%. Despite an average increase of 15% to 20% in 2010, another Use synonyms
language
replaced no other Use synonyms
language
as the second highest of pupils number in 2010.Use synonyms
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