The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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These charts illustrate some

informations

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information

pieces of information

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crime

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crimes

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committed in England

the

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in the

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last

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year. The pointed line graph shows the fluctuation of

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crime

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the crime

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rate based on the

relashionship

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relationship

between age and

crime

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. As we can see,

children

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for children

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from 0 to 8 years old

nobodys

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nobody

had committed a

crime

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, but others from the age 8 to 12

did

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committed

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almost 5

thounsand

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thousand

crimes

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. The line from 12 and 20 years old

rosed

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rose

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up and to achieve peaks of 70 and 80

thounsand

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thousand

crimes

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. Around the age of 24 young people became more quiet. The pie chart

decribes

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describes

the different types of

crime

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. The most

crimes

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committed were violent

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crime

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crimes

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which have the biggest slice of

pie

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the pie

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with 46%.

Porperty

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Property

crimes

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and drug

crimes

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23% and 22% respectively. The

last

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one, which is the public order

crimes

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is a slice that

have

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the smallest size

beacuse

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because

in 9%.

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, many young guys of 20 years old more or less

have

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apply

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committed violent

crimes

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last

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year.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words crime, crimes with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.

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2
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

161 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

The line graph depicts
The pie chart illustrates
reveals
displays
depicts
the trend of
the overall crime rate
steadily decreased
the distribution of
different types of crime
prevalent
accounts for
the most common crime
followed by
make up
a smaller proportion of
the total crimes
a smaller percentage
approximately
the remaining percentage
It is important to note that
reflects

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