The graph below shows the change in production (Million Tonnes) of three products in the forest industry in a European country.
The line graph depicts the change in manufacturing of three various
products
in the forest industry in a European region from 1990 to 2000. It is clear from the graph that the amount of paper products
dominated compared to other products
while
the equivalent figure for the pulp creation ranked the lowest over the period shown. According to
what is shown, in 1980 the Paper product
saw a clear upward trend compared with other products
In 1980 the forest industry produced the fewest amount of pulp with a figure of about 4 million
in the following year there was a reduction in the amount of pulp product
then
remained stable in 2000. On the other hand
, in 1980 the timber product
reached 4 million
.Afterwards
the quantity of timber Add a comma
Afterwards,
product
Fix the agreement mistake
products
pecked
at 8 Correct your spelling
peaked
million
then
sharply declined to 6 million
in the following year. After that, returned to the highest with a figure of about 8 million
in 2000.Submitted by aldossaryfaten95 on
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