This graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
The graph illustrates energy utilization in six various ways from 1880 to 2030 in the USA.
It is obvious that the majority of people about 35
units
used oil and petrol in 2980, then
it fluctuated until 1995. After that, it has been rising notably until now and forecasted that it will go up to about 50 units
in 2030.
Coal was approximately five units
lower than Natural gases in 1980. Both of them increased significantly until 2015. The projections show that, while
natural gas will reach a plateau of around 25 units
in 2015, the use of coal will ascend markedly until 2030.
The use of nuclear , solar wind , and hydropower was at the same point in 1980, just under 5 units
. The nuclear and solar wind has
a slight growth over 50 years. Meanwhile, hydropower remains unchanged.
Correct subject-verb agreement
have
Overall
, the consumption of petrol and oil was
the most popular in 1980 and soared through the years. Afterwards, although
the use of natural gas was more than coal in 1980, it has altered after some period. At last
, the utilization of other fuels has no change over 50 periods.Submitted by Elnaz.darang on
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